

Chapter-1: ScreamsIntoTheWind


Leonard Tabb writes
2 months ago:
This description of Aliyah's pre-concert routine is so vivid. I love how you detail the apartment's unique atmosphere. And that Camaro she rebuilt sounds sick! It makes me wonder how she got the parts for the atmosphere shift and clean energy core. Also, the way they all pile into the car and head out, it's like a scene from a cool movie. Can't wait to see what happens at the concert!